[acornlive] submits

Christopher Neenan (acornlive@dublinwriters.org)
Sat, 21 Oct 2000 10:57:56 +0200

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Hello Nessa,

Thank you again for the four in your last number. Here are some things I =
have worked on recently. This is a terribly busy time for me at =
everything but poetry.

How did the get-together with the Liverpudlians go? I sent a =
well-wishing message on the night but i don't know if they got it.



Regards,

Chris





Ravens

If you ask me it will rain.

That's what skies are sometimes

for. Like one time I was caught

without a coat or umbrella

and only two other ravens

daring to cross from one wood

to another. They endured in their

own way and only the three

of us were there to know how=20

dark that day was. When

the downpour came they soared

up into it and barked back at me

and stayed for a long time in

the sky between the two woods.

That was my bolt lightening

for that day and more than

enough too! To be out in it was

all, a place for myth to advance

across a soaked field and we ourselves

forced into it. Living, naked

clouds came up from the south

west because the wind had=20

changed and the day spread out

into a raven landscape of rain.






Looking Out

We were looking out after something woke us,

a clutter,

waking, sleeping,=20

fingers misleading,=20

deceitful declining padding.

What had left?

An ambulance in chrysan-

themum yellow,=20

searching into

night's light, an=20

unsettling kind.=20

Looking out, we saw=20

along the roadway

flashes=20

of amber=20

a blustering rush=20

of clenched leaves.

What is it?

disbelieved presence?

In a window in the rain,=20

our glassed faces=20

look at limits,=20

receptacles,

the sick=20

dead leaves.

Our mirror cracked from=20

your side to my side.=20

We took three paces

through the room.

Rain ran on panes,

in yellow lines.


Rain woke us.=20

Our ambivalent bed=20

turned cold

and gave us

a language for looking out.












Summer

All summer I was marked for someplace nobody heard of

parting clung around me

like darkness round a lamppost

hinged in a memory of light on an overcast day

cracks high up on a wall of cloud

and long rituals of door-locking



It happened like this if I remember rightly

shadows slipped fast across a makeshift window

in the kitchen they handled their money carefully

like they handled their quarrels

when the children were in bed

and night curved round

thread after thread to make a knot of sleep

I listened to their talk

and their struggle with the loss of love

in the troublesome dark

until the beat of moths on the skylight

and as much of day as I could carry




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Hello Nessa,

Thank you again for the four in = your last=20 number. Here are some things I have worked on recently. This is a = terribly busy=20 time for me at everything but poetry.

How did the get-together with the = Liverpudlians=20 go? I sent a well-wishing message on the night but i don't know if they = got=20 it.

 

Regards,

Chris

 

 

Ravens<= /A>

If you ask me it will rain.

That’s what skies are sometimes

for. Like one time I was caught

without a coat or umbrella

and only two other ravens

daring to cross from one wood

to another. They endured in their

own way and only the three

of us were there to know how

dark that day was. When

the downpour came they soared

up into it and barked back at me

and stayed for a long time in

the sky between the two woods.

That was my bolt lightening

for that day and more than

enough too! To be out in it was

all, a place for myth to advance

across a soaked field and we ourselves

forced into it. Living, naked

clouds came up from the south

west because the wind had

changed and the day spread out

into a raven landscape of rain.

 

 

Looking=20 Out=

We were looking out after something woke us,

a clutter,

waking, sleeping,

fingers misleading,

deceitful declining padding.

What had left?

An ambulance in chrysan-

themum yellow,

searching into

night’s light, an

unsettling kind.

Looking out, we saw

along the roadway

flashes

of amber

a blustering rush

of clenched leaves.

What is it?

disbelieved presence?

In a window in the rain,

our glassed faces

look at limits,

receptacles,

the sick

dead leaves.

Our mirror cracked from

your side to my side.

We took three paces

through the room.

Rain ran on panes,

in yellow lines.

Rain woke us.

Our ambivalent bed

turned cold

and gave us

a language for looking out.

 

 

 

 

 

Summer= <= /P>

All summer I was marked for someplace nobody heard of

parting clung around me

like darkness round a lamppost

hinged in a memory of light on an overcast day

cracks high up on a wall of cloud

and long rituals of door-locking

 

It happened like this if I remember rightly

shadows slipped fast across a makeshift window

in the kitchen they handled their money carefully

like they handled their quarrels

when the children were in bed

and night curved round

thread after thread to make a knot of sleep

I listened to their talk

and their struggle with the loss of love

in the troublesome dark

until the beat of moths on the skylight

and as much of day as I could carry

 

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